Review ~ Invicta: Salvation by Piper Kay

Title: Invicta: Salvation
Author: Piper Kay
Genre: MM, Adult, Contemporary, Romance
Pages: 101
Heat Level: 4 out of 4 flames
Overall Star Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Reviewed by Naughty Book Snitch: Mindy
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As Kaiden McKenzie and Holt Mitchell prepare to celebrate their fifteenth anniversary, and the grand opening of their new club, Invicta, they take a look back on how their lives together began.

When Holt wakes up to an outraged father, he finds himself suddenly homeless and hungry. With the help and caring of a certain bad guy, Holt finds life isn’t quite so bad as it seems. All he needed was the right man to guide him along.

Kade has spent his life running from anyone and everyone who tries to get close, but when he meets up with Holt, he suddenly finds himself wishing for something more. Who knew he was someone’s knight in shining tattoos…

 

 

Review

 

 

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We start off in present day with Kade and Holt celebrating their 15 year anniversary and their soon to be grand opening of their new business adventure, Invicta. While celebrating they reminisce about how they met. Then we flashback to 1999, where the real story takes place.

 

 

Holt. Sexy cowboy with a fucked up home life who just wants to hurry up and go to college on a football scholarship. Holt is still in the closet about his sexuality until what was supposed to be a one night stand ends up changing his entire life.

 

 

killer abs

 

 

Kade. Oh my sweet control freak, territorial, bad boy who tries everything to get away from Holt. No attachments. One night stand. Don’t need any drama in his life. He’s got enough on his plate already without having to take care of an innocent, naive and sexy Holt. But this bad boy does have a conscious and the way Holt sucks on that lip, mmmm… irresistible.

 

 

sexy and slow

lip suck mutha fucker

 

 

Salvation – Preservation or deliverance from harm, ruin, or loss. A source or means of being saved from harm, ruin, or loss.
To be rescued or saved.

 

 

Let’s get right to it shall we… I LOVED it!

Cover Porn ✔
Good Story ✔
Humor ✔
Sexy men fucking ✔
Cocky Boys ✔ ✔
check

 

 

My first thought when I sat down to read this was, male strippers?

 

 

dance party

 

 

‘Oh please, oh please, oh please be good’. I wasn’t sure how it was going to work with strippers and dancing and how to convey that through text. I didn’t want to read about a bunch of technical terms that I’m unfamiliar with and end up pulling me out of the story….

 

 

fingers crossed

 

 

Well, well, well, I don’t even know why I was worried. Its The Piper Mutha Fuckin’ Kay that were talking about here. I mean… I should be bent over and spanked for even thinking that… please 😉 I love Piper Kay’s books and she’s not ever let me down. Shame on me for doubting the Queen of Cocks… The Snake Charming Mistress… Sheriff of the Cum Guns… Pied Piper of the Penis…
magic dong

 

 

The little bit of dancing that was in here was somewhat easy to follow. There were a couple of times it was difficult for me to picture what was going on. So I’ve added a couple of gifs to help with the visualization…

 

 

body roll
hip roll

 

 

Sex, sex, sex!! FUCK YEAH! I love the way Piper Kay writes a sex scene. Doesn’t matter what book you’re reading from her… there will always be something for everyone. Sexy, hot and sometimes even masturbation worthy. Kade and Holt are really hot together. I love the chemistry that these two have.

 

 

sexy mm kiss

 

 

“Cowboy, you were down on the bathroom floor having a near death experience about five hours ago, you can’t handle this hotness.”

 

 

Challenge accepted!
oh yeah

 

 

I bet you’re wondering why I only gave it 4 stars. Ahem, these are just minor things really. There is one part in the novella that Holts name is spelled Hoyt. Hello True Blood country boy. Also the dancing reference to the Roger Rabbit is ok but the twerking and Harlem Shake I think are fairly new terms. So, I asked Master Google and from what I could find out Harlem Shake came about in 2013. Maybe there is another Harlem Shake that I wasn’t aware of in the 90’s which is totally possible. Twerking on the other hand… according to the ‘Oxford Dictionary Online’ said the word had been around for 20 years. I know, I know… I docked it a star for this because this is the only thing that pulled me from the story. I actually stopped reading so I could look it up.

 

 

twerk it out

 

 

Overall Invicta: Salvation rocked out with its cock out. The story never once got dull and it flowed really well. I think this could have been a longer book and I think Kade has a lot more back story to tell. There was just a touch of suspense and it made my heart skipped a couple of beats, but I wasnt left hanging on the hook long. I just loved Salvation and I can’t wait to read the next one!

 

 

I’ll leave you with this. One of my favorite quotes…

 

“Goddammit, stop. No, wait. Yes…. just fuckin’ hell! I yank my dick in my hand and curl my fingers around myself, squeezing as tight as I can. I’m practically strangling the fucker to stop blood flow to it. Focus on old pussy, yeah, anything that stops this. My head starts throbbing now too, great. Please don’t let that mean hot dick blood just invaded my brain because that things gets out of hand and doesn’t think rational. I’ll end up dead or running off to the alter or something.”

 

 

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About The Author

 

 

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About me: Piper Kay is a homegrown country girl straight from the outskirts of Houston, Texas, USA. She is a #1 International Best Selling author of LGBT Erotica, and an International Bestselling author of LGBT Erotica romance, gay romance, specifically in the male/male (m/m) erotica genre, and LGBT drama. Piper is bringing her passion of storytelling straight to the pages, most times served with a super-sized sprinkle of sexy, a slice of sarcasm and a carafe of crazy.

 

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3 thoughts on “Review ~ Invicta: Salvation by Piper Kay

  1. OMGGGG! I am crying from laughing so hard, whew! ~fans self~ I always love getting your reviews because you could totally slam me and make it hysterical. I’m glad you liked it and your visuals I may have to come back too and check it out while writing in book three.
    Oh, I’ve been told the dance terms you were wrong, etc, but I really do research this stuff. No it’s not all writing sexy scenes all the time. Take the hours I spent on youtube watching go-go dancers. Talk about some tough research, but I’m willing to do this. HA! I know, I know, but someone has to do it, for the sake of the story. bwahahaha. No, seriously, I did have to look for this because I don’t want to put something in a story that I can’t back up with a reference, not something technical. Promise! Harlem Shake originated in 1981 ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harlem_shake_(dance) ) and twerk-it does go back to the 1990’s. I found it first mentioned back in 1993 in a song called Jubilee All by D.J. Jubilee out of New Orleans. The history of it is kind of cool, but I like all things music related, so for me it was fun to research it all.
    I appreciate you reading it and I need to know where that word is at that is misspelled, I have looked and I cannot find it for the life of me to correct it. It could have been corrected in the second upload to Amazon after I had to change something else. It was about three days after the original upload.
    Thanks again for this, I appreciate it a ton.

  2. Girl, you rock out with your box out. I fucking love your books so hard! Thank you for saying those nice things. *batting eyelashes and blushing* I will always read anything you ever write. You are one of my top MM authors. My husband thanks too 😉

    The dancing terminology didn’t bother me at all and it never derailed from the story. When I was looking up twerking and the Harlem Shake I had learned a lot of new things. And for the life of me I couldn’t find an origin date on the Harlem shake, so thank you for sharing that with me. 🙂 I was super surprised about twerking and how far back it went. There was never a doubt in my mind about your research. I cant imagine the amount of research you must do. I mean, I would totally get bored. Hmmmm, well YouTube is entertaining… So maybe I wouldn’t. Well, I think I’ll leave that up to the experts like you. Sometimes I have the attention span of a gnat. But that is just one of the many things that makes you awesome. You sacrifice your time for the entertainment of my mind and body…. and other reader’s. I’m totally in Piper Kay worship mode right now ♥.

    I bought Salvation when it first came out so I’m sure you got Holt/Hoyt’s name fixed and I have the original. On my kindle it’s at 60%, location 1110. Right after they kick it old school.
    “Don’t even think about it, you dick starved mother fucker.”
    “Think about what?” Hoyt’s suddenly standing there, asking. I never even heard the music go off.
    “Thanks for the save earlier, Kade. I wasn’t sure…”
    “Fuck off,”

    Well, I love you long time, but now its time to venture off back into my Sanctuary… 😀 LOL! See what I did there Love you tons though and thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your work.

    • Hahahaha about your husband! ROCK! Thank you for the point out on that name thing, going to check it in just a few minutes. It’s been mentioned to me before, and has driven me to a new point of batshit crazy trying to find it. Lol. Idk where my head was that day. (like I know any other day either-hahaha) I just haven’t been able to find it-now I have a location. lol When I was writing this I was trying to come up with a name, and the character Hoyt on True Blood was sort of like the character I could relate it to, so I’m surprised I didn’t mess that up ten times over. lol
      Research for me is a blast. There are a ton of places to look for things, but by far the best of them, the leader of my resource reference sites, you may have heard of it, is cockyboys.com BWAHAHAHAA! Sometimes I may even find myself researching for no apparent reason whatsoever. Go figure-hahaha
      You just made my day with your comment about being one of your top MM authors. Seriously, that means so much to me, what a huge compliment. Thank you! ~hugs~!

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