Review ~ Monstrous Lust: The Forest Stud’s Seed by E.M. Beastly

Title: Monstrous Lust: The Forest Stud’s Seed
Series: In the Forest of Lust #1
Author: E.M. Beastly
Genre: Monster Erotica
Pages: 14
Heat Level: 2 out of 4 flames
Overall: 2 out of 5 stars
Reviewed by Naughty Book Snitch: Mindy
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Lena is lost in an old enchanted forest where legends of lustful creatures and demons roam. Will she escape, or willingly submit herself to new experiences that could only exist in an erotic fairy world?

 

 

“It should be known that this work and all other works in this series deals with erotic and sexual encounters with the unusual. It is an exploration of erotica beyond the mundane limitations of the real world.

This causes my work to touch upon very taboo subjects of inhuman monsters, creatures and mythical beasts having sexual relationships, hardcore sexual orgies and group sex with women. If that is not your thing, then sadly this book is not for you.

But if you are curious about what sex could be like with creatures of fur and fang; or scales, gills and feathers. Then prepare for a fun read.

So sit back, relax and remember: If it has a human level of intelligence or better. If it can communicate with a language. If it is sexually mature for it’s species. Then you should be ale to fuck it. Not that something like that exists in our known reality. But that is what fiction is for, right?”

 

 

Review

 

 

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Mehh… Feels incomplete to me. Let me try to explain… The premise of the story is good but it feels like there are pieces missing. There are no explanations or insight as to how things came to be and why they are. I know it’s only 14 pages, but maybe drop some hints as to why Lena is in the enchanted forest. It does mention that her and her friends were there, but why and where are her friends now and if they are still there how did they get separated? Why are they there in the first place? Just seems like there are holes in the story and it kind of feels forced.

 

 

“You’re the monster from that old legend. The devil who was summoned by the witch who lived here over a hundred years ago, aren’t you?”

 

 

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I also think that some of the dialog seemed a little off compared to genre of the story? I’m not sure I can explain this correctly… It’s like mixing porn with an articulate mythological creature who is regal and Godly and Lena is the TSTL character that has had a lobotomy and is just… there.

 

 

“Now the pact will be signed. Let the earthly bodies combine with the heavens. I shall watch and continue to be pleased.”

 

 

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The sex was also just okay to me. It came at you hard and fast like a sneak attack acid trip. I’ve not read anything with bird monsters before. So that was new and intriguing. πŸ™‚

What I did like is that the story has promise and it’s a great concept for monster erotica. It has this other worldly and/or dark fairy tale feel to it. Since this is only a 14 page story, maybe the other stories will shine some light into some of those holes that I feel are missing. I’m not expecting a 400 page masterpiece, but I do expect for the story to make sense. It’s like a drive by fictioning. I feel like somebody just hit me with something that could be fabulous but I’m not sure what. So I will be continuing on with the series.

 

 

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Well this is going to be fun. Welcome to monster and supernatural erotica untamed. I am new to this game but I have a lot planned. An author from the lonely state of Wyoming. I have always wanted to drive the limits of human fantasy and sexuality. Over these last years with the rise of more and more monstrous erotic material, it became time for me to enter this game. So let my stories take you to a fantastic place where the rules are bent a little.

 

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