Review ~ Teaching My Stepdaughter by Emma Jack

Title: Teaching My Stepdaughter 
Series: Teaching You #1
Author: Emma Jack
Genre: Erotica, Taboo, Smut
Pages: 24
Heat Level: 4 out of 4 flames
Overall: 4 out of 5 stars
Reviewed by Naughty Book Snitch: Mindy
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I’d been watching my stepdaughter, Heather, grow into a beautiful woman.
Waiting has never been something I could do, but I did for her.
She was now eighteen and ready for me to teach her a few things Daddy liked.

 

 

 

 

I received a copy of this book via the author in exchange for an honest review. Then immediately bought my own copy after I was done reading 😉

 

Heather is 18, innocent and has a sinfully sexy body. Her stepdad has had enough of Heather’s teasing and flaunting herself in front of him. He is finally going do something about it and teach his naive stepdaughter how to ease some of this built up tension.

What a fantastically filthy short story! This one is going onto the 2 finger, 1 handed read shelf for sure. As with any story, you have some things you like and maybe some things you are a little puzzled about. I really like the slow but steady build of sexual tension while the author still gives you some of the goodies to keep you in a constant sexually frustrated state. Each scene was totally hot and masturbation worthy. I also really enjoyed that both of these characters seemed to know exactly what they wanted but were too scared to say it out loud. So “Daddy” kept coming up with lame excuses to put them in compromising situations.

 

 

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“It’s okay, sweetie, but I really need help. It’s been so sore lately. If you just rub it up and down gently, that should ease it a bit.”

 

 

I could go on and on about each of the scenes but I’ll let you daddy hungry deviants discover that on your own.

Alright, one of the things that confused me was the highway handy scene. Why did Daddy already have a condom on his already erect penis before picking up Heather? Presumptuous much? Does he have a 24 hour stiffy? If so, he should probably see a doctor about that or try out his Long Dong Spearer in the porn business. 😉 On the flip side… to each their own. I loved the highway handy but the condom was odd and pulled me out of my fantasy just a tiny bit.

The other thing that kind of confused me were the lame excuses to get the action started. Don’t get me wrong, I totally loved every filthy minute of it and it was incredibly hot. My confusion is with the easiness of jumping into the situations and not really a lot of sexual innuendo banter between the two. We get one very short scene, two paragraphs, of what Heather is thinking. I wanted a little bit more of Heathers side of the story. Clearly she knew exactly what was going on and I guess I wanted that side of her to come out a little more. Anyway, those are super minor things and they don’t really distract from the story itself.

Overall, this was a great short read. It’s a perfect quickie to get the oven warmed up right before the main event. Or just to give yourself a little goodnight rubdown. I recommend this quickie to lovers of the step taboo and anyone who loves a good smutty story.

 

 

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Teaching My Stepdaughter (Teaching You Taboo Collection Book 1) by Emma Jack

 

 

 

I’d been watching my stepdaughter, Heather, grow into a beautiful woman.
Waiting has never been something I could do, but I did for her.
She was now eighteen and ready for me to teach her a few things Daddy liked.

 

 

Pre-order the book for only $.99.
This book is also in the Amazon kindle unlimited program.

 

 

 

Expected release date: June 13, 2017

Review ~ The Boss’ Sexy Secretary by Chastity Deschain

Title: The Boss’ Sexy Secretary
Series: NA
Author: Chastity Deschain
Genre: Smut, Billionaire
Pages: 18
Heat Level: 3 out of 4 flames
Overall: 4 out of 5 stars
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When Felicity Winters started her new job, she had no idea her boss was going to be handsome Ryan Harding, billionaire advertising mogul. She dresses provocatively to get his attention… and fails. Felicity does everything she can except throw herself at him to get his attention, but nothing works until late one Friday night when he calls her into his office. Is this her chance to capture his attention and get the satisfaction she craves?

This steamy, erotic billionaire short is 5000+ words in length.

 

 

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Felicity has just landed a great job working for Ryan Harding as his secretary. Things get off to a rough start, but Felicity is a smart and strong woman and she’s not going to let any basic bitches derail her. As long as Mr. Harding is happy, then she is doing her job right. 😉

 

 

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I would rate this between 3 & 4 stars, so I’m rounding up to 4. Pretty good for a short and smutty book. This is my first Chastity Deschain book and I will for sure read more from this author (I think I’m going to try her Wanted book next. Looks good 😉 ).

Anyway, although the ‘billionaire’ troupe has been super played out, this one isn’t in your face rich guy. I mean… its mentioned but this is such a short quickie that there is no time to get into it. The restroom solo scene was a bit awkward for me and some of the dialogue was cheesy but I really did enjoy the Friday night after work sex scene. Especially the belt… *shivers*.

 

 

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I also have the audio book of this and its very interesting to hear someone else voice in your head. Haha! I mean, I already know what Felicity and Mr. Harding sound like in my head but for someone else to give them voices was interesting. Kalinda Little is the narrator for this and I think she did a great job. However, when it first started and before I got used to her voice, I felt like she could have been reading the news. 🙂 But I ended up really enjoying her.

Overall, I enjoyed it and this is a great quickie to read on your lunch break or right before bed. The story, narrator and sex are good.

 

 

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Review ~ Garden Gnome Sex Party by Fannie Tucker

Title: Garden Gnome Sex Party
Also known as “Garden Gnome Gangbang”
Series: NA
Author: Fannie Tucker
Genre: Monster, Smut
Pages: 21
Heat Level: 2 out of 4 flames
Overall: 4 out of 5 stars
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When Jenny adds a little whimsical flavor to her garden with a trio of gnome statues, she never suspects what’s in store. When the sun goes down, Jenny discovers her new lawn ornaments are ready to get busy, and they know how to use those pointy red hats to please a woman!

Warning: Explicit adult material. Three on one action, hard pointy hats, and gnomehoods as big as any man’s! 3300 words

 

 

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I’ve had this book on my TBR for a while and thought I would give it a try on this long weekend. What better way to spend the 4th of July weekend reading a short and smutty book. 😉

This is a really silly, funny and very erotic short story. Jenny loves her garden and spent a little extra money ordering 3 garden gnmoes for her beautiful garden. Fudwick, Loopwyn and Bimpo are the Gnomes that arrived. Jenny immediately placed the gnomes in the garden then went to read one of her steamy romance novels (sounds familiar 😉 ). When Jenny started feeling a little horny and touching herself while reading, the Gnomes started moving a little closer to her.

 

 

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“If this is all a dream, what can it hurt?”

 

 

I’m sure you can imagine what happened next.

 

 

“A lickey-loo! A lickey-loo! She’s going to give me a lickey-loo!”

 

 

“Loopwyn, Bimpo, my gnome friends,
She sounds pleased, and so our pleasure ends!
Living in the garden, sing and hum!
Drench this lady with our gnomish come!”

 

 

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“Oh my goodness, it tastes like candy!”

 

 

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Overall, this is pretty good. I enjoyed it and it made me laugh.

 

 

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Fannie Tucker likes driving too fast, cussing too loud, and writing stories that explore sexual fantasies of strong women rendered powerless by lust-filled men and monsters. She seeks to give her readers fresh, original stories that sometimes shock, always titillate, and leave them guessing until the very end.

She first discovered her talent for steamy prose while passing dirty notes to her boyfriend during English 201. When her professor confiscated one of the notes, he kept her after class and recommended a new and interesting line of work. She’s never looked back.

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Review ~ I Fucked the Puppet by Fannie Tucker

Title: I Fucked the Puppet
Series: NA
Author: Fannie Tucker
Genre: Monster, Smut
Pages: 15
Heat Level: 2 out of 4 flames
Overall: 3 out of 5 stars
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Aspiring ballerina Emily doesn’t like her job as a backup dancer on the “Dongo the Puppet” show. When she stays late to get a wardrobe malfunction repaired, Dongo catches her ballet dancing, and Emily finds out what it’s like to dance on puppet strings!

Warning: Explicit sexual content. Puppet sex, bondage, domination, and a big green monster who knows how to please a woman! 4000 words.

 

 

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Meh, it was okay. Interesting concept with a magical puppet.

Cass is a new backup dancer for Dongo the Puppet show. Not exactly where she wanted to be in her career. Late one night she bumps into Dongo, who still hasn’t taken off his costume. Dongo ends up teasing and pissing Cass off but things suddenly turn in a completely different direction. So why not just go with it….

 

 

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“Well, it’s not every day you get to fuck an imaginary puppet, may as well give him head.

 

 

Yep, sounds legit. Hahaha 😀

 

 

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The first half of the book is the “story” and the second half is a bunch of excerpts for other books. But overall, it was just okay. A quick smutty and funny read and I would most definitely read more from this author.

 

 

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Review ~ Hard, Fast, and Unprotected…With Him! by Jenni Sartre

Title: Hard, Fast, and Unprotected…With Him!
Series: NA
Author: Jenni Sartre
Genre: Taboo, Smut, Food Fetish
Pages: 15
Heat Level: 2 out of 4 flames
Overall: 2 out of 5 stars
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I didn’t expect to ever see him again

When Theresa goes to the Cherry Gala with her friends, she doesn’t expect to have her body put up to the charity auction, and she certainly doesn’t expect to be purchased by the handsome man she knows very well…

Theresa’s aching body has been waiting a long time for him…and he’s ready to take her hard, fast, and unprotected. The only problem is:

He’s the man of the house

 

 

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Resa is an artist. She is invited, by one her clients to go to a masquerade party (I think that is where she is at) where her artwork is displayed. Her client then puts her up for auction. Then there is this guy who is checking her out and he wins her in the auction. He claims his prize by immediately kissing her. While this guy is kissing her, Resa has this random thought…..

 

 

“My mind suddenly produces an image of me sucking strawberry glaze off his cock and a mewling noise rises from deep within my throat.”

 

 

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Okay… so the red flags and alarms are going off in my head. I do not like food and sex mixed together. Just thinking about it makes me want to vomit. To each their own and if that is something you like, then you go for it.

So I continue reading and Resa and this guy she just met, start fucking. They have masks on and realize later that they know each other. This masked guy is her mom’s exhusband. Then the crazy food sexcapades start and they raid the refrigerator. Whipped cream, chocolate syrup and cherries. Its like a sex Sunday and the masked exstep dad is bringing the banana.

 

 

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So then I read this quote….

“Why is there a cherry in the toilet now?”
He stuck his face around the curtain, “Sounds like a personal problem to me.”
I rolled my eyes at him and he shrugged, “What? Did I pop your cherry or something?”

 

 

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Nope. I cant do food fetish. Ugh! There should be a warning that says *FOOD FETISH*. I knew this was a taboo read and all I wanted was to read a quick smutty book before bed. But then food happened and ruined it for me.

If taboo step parent and food fetish is your thing, then you might want to pick this one up. But not my cuppa.

 

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Review ~ Stuffed by my Teddy by Lacey St. Claire

Title: Stuffed by my Teddy
Series: Stuffed by my Teddy #1
Author: Lacey St. Claire
Genre: Monster Erotica, Plushies/Furries
Pages: 35
Heat Level: 4 out of 4 flames
Overall: 4 out of 5 stars
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Laura is surprised to find that her beloved stuffed teddy bears are much kinkier than she ever imagined!

Laura just had her 18th birthday making her a full-fledged adult, but there’s one thing she’s never been comfortable getting rid of – her favorite teddy bears. Late each night she is awoken to a fapping sound coming from the direction of her closet, but each time she investigates she finds nothing but clothes and her beloved bears. That is until Laura wakes up horny one morning and decides to pretend that one of her bears is a real man. As she wiggles and grinds on top of her furry friend she awakens a desire that she never knew could exist. The very next evening the bears take matters into their own hands and she finds herself bound to fulfil their furry fantasies. Before the evening is over she will be double stuffed by her plushies and loving every second of it.

 

 

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Oh my goodness! Why do I love the weird stuff so much 😀 This was really funny and super hot. Great short read to put you in the mood or to double click your mouse. Who knew teddy bears could be this hot?

 

 

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Laura’s been hearing someone masturbating in her closet for a while now. Every time she goes to investigate, she cant find anyone. Finally one night after hearing that fapping noise again, she grabs her favorite teddy bear to sleep with and get comfort. The next morning she is super horny and decides to use her teddy bear and pretend it is a real man.

This is just silly and erotic fun. So, me being the fabulous weirdo that I am… I’m getting the next one.

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“You like being fucked by your teddy bears big hard cock don’t you?”

 

 

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Lacey St. Claire remembers one of her first encounters with erotica. She doesn’t remember the exact age but knows it was pre-15. The local library had a book sale and she had picked up a book that appeared to be about witches and demons. Every kids dream right? Reading through the book one evening after school she came to a single story about the devil. Within the story the devil pounded a woman with his fiery rod. It was sinful, it was sexy, and it was HOT. The page became earmarked and was reread numerous times that year.

Now that Lacey is an author she wants to provide people the same thrill that she first experienced. She knows that reading erotica is still often viewed as taboo and is a great secret among most women, but it shouldn’t be. She wants everyone to be able to celebrate their individual tastes and to be able to experiment and explore through her erotic fiction. It doesn’t matter if your kink is alien breeding, BDSM, or men in tight motorcycle gear and helmets, there is something to get off anyone.

If you’re horny and you want to do something about it then you should. Erotica can be a great way to release stress and to get the juices flowing even if it’s just for your sexy stud at home. Don’t be afraid, don’t be ashamed, turn those pages and flick your nub. Enjoy yourself!!

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Review ~ The Shagging Tree by Alana Melos

Title: The Shagging Tree
Series: NA
Author: Alana Melos
Genre: Monster Erotica
Pages: 13
Heat Level: 2.5 out of 4 flames
Overall: 4 out of 5 stars
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An erotic, satirical re-imagining of a classic story, this short story follows the path of a lovely young woman and a tree who loves her so. This erotic short has 4000+ words of steamy, indescribable foliage on flesh action.

 

 

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Haha! What a fun and sexy read! This is my first monster tree erotica and it was pretty good. To be honest, I was really curious how this author was going to pull it off but it worked out and made me laugh.

Our “young lady” has spent most of her life sitting under this tree. When she leaves for college and comes back upset due to people making fun of her sexual inexperience, she goes straight to her special place under the tree. The tree offers guidance and to show her how things feel.

 

 

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Of course she takes the offer. If someone is handing out free orgasms with no… branches 😉 attached, then I’d take it.

So as the story progresses, she keeps coming back to learn more about sex. I loved it when she came back for the BJ lesson. The tree grows a boner and gets a treat of his own. Hahaha!

 

 

“‘I am having fun,’ the woman breathed. ‘I want to suck your cock, tree! It tastes really good, not like my boyfriend’s cock at all, but rather like something good and wholesome.'”

 

 

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I’m sure you get the idea of how the story is going. When actual intercourse happens it’s pretty entertaining and strangely hot. Not hot enough for me to go and find a tree to fuck, but hot.

 

 

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Overall, this was really funny, erotic, strange and entertaining. There may even be a lesson involved with this book… don’t always be a taker. I would love to throw some more quotes in here, but I don’t want to give anything away and I’ve already said too much. Anyway, if you haven’t had the opportunity to step into this authors head, it is well worth the trip. I love her books and her writing style.

 

 

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ALANA MELOS is a struggling author who found out writing erotica gave her much more freedom in writing than when she wrote the “serious” literary stuff. Since this discovery, she’s endeavored to write the very best interesting, weird, plot-driven, and hot erotica she can. She sincerely hopes to just entertain people, whether they read for the plot, the weird factor, or the racy factor. Along with her loving husband, she lives with a crazy cat.

 

 

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Review ~ Monstrous Lust: Naked Nymph, Playful Forest by E.M. Beastly

Title: Monstrous Lust: Naked Nymph, Playful Forest
Series: In the Forest of Lust #2
Author: E.M. Beastly
Genre: Monster Erotica
Pages: 16
Heat Level: 2.5 out of 4 flames
Overall: 2.5 out of 5 stars
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Review for Monstrous Lust: The Forest Stud’s Seed #1 by E.M. Beastly

 

 

Lena has fallen prey to the lustful god of the forest and set loose inside his labyrinth. Now only his beastly servants can show Lena the way out. Will they? Or will the monsters feed her the fruits of carnal forbidden desire?

 

“It should be known that this work and all other works in this series deals with erotic and sexual encounters with the unusual. It is an exploration of erotica beyond the mundane limitations of the real world.

This causes my work to touch upon very taboo subjects of inhuman monsters, creatures and mythical beasts having sexual relationships, hardcore sexual orgies and group sex with women. If that is not your thing, then sadly this book is not for you.

But if you are curious about what sex could be like with creatures of fur and fang; or scales, gills and feathers. Then prepare for a fun read.

So sit back, relax and remember: If it has a human level of intelligence or better. If it can communicate with a language. If it is sexually mature for it’s species. Then you should be ale to fuck it. Not that something like that exists in our known reality. But that is what fiction is for, right?”

 

 

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This one is better than the first one. I did get some information as to how Lena ended up in the forest. Her and her friends had heard stories about the forest monsters, demons and horned goat men. Supposedly a lot of women had gone missing from there. So why not gather a group of friends to check it out and have a sleep over in the “haunted” forest. Well, isnt this how some horror movies start? Well, apparently porn can start this way too. Hahaha!

 

 

 

 

So Lena wakes up naked and in a different place in the forest. She then finds some water to swim and or bath in and she is approached by a ferret/weasel monster man. I bet you can’t guess what happens next… or maybe you can. After all this is monster erotica.

You know what… the ferret/weasel monster man thing was pretty good. I kind of dug it. I didn’t even mind the sticky fruit and that stuff usually grosses me out.

 

 

“I Kodo. Only one here now but others waiting deeper in. I want to mate with you!”

 

 

 

 

Well, Lena is a self admitted slut and pretty horny all the time so she’ll just add ferret monster man to her list of adventurous things shes done.

 

 

 

 

When Kodo and Lena are done “mating”, Lena finds out that she needs to travel further into the forest if she wants to find her friends. Sounds like a sex quest to me! Okay… I’m in. I’d like to find out more.

Overall, it was okay. This one did shed some light onto what in the world was going on and made more since. The ferret monster man was a new one for me but I liked it. So, Im happy that I did read this story and I do plan on reading the next one. I think the first story would have been a lot better if this one was included in it.

 

 

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Review ~ Monstrous Lust: The Forest Stud’s Seed by E.M. Beastly

Title: Monstrous Lust: The Forest Stud’s Seed
Series: In the Forest of Lust #1
Author: E.M. Beastly
Genre: Monster Erotica
Pages: 14
Heat Level: 2 out of 4 flames
Overall: 2 out of 5 stars
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Lena is lost in an old enchanted forest where legends of lustful creatures and demons roam. Will she escape, or willingly submit herself to new experiences that could only exist in an erotic fairy world?

 

 

“It should be known that this work and all other works in this series deals with erotic and sexual encounters with the unusual. It is an exploration of erotica beyond the mundane limitations of the real world.

This causes my work to touch upon very taboo subjects of inhuman monsters, creatures and mythical beasts having sexual relationships, hardcore sexual orgies and group sex with women. If that is not your thing, then sadly this book is not for you.

But if you are curious about what sex could be like with creatures of fur and fang; or scales, gills and feathers. Then prepare for a fun read.

So sit back, relax and remember: If it has a human level of intelligence or better. If it can communicate with a language. If it is sexually mature for it’s species. Then you should be ale to fuck it. Not that something like that exists in our known reality. But that is what fiction is for, right?”

 

 

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Mehh… Feels incomplete to me. Let me try to explain… The premise of the story is good but it feels like there are pieces missing. There are no explanations or insight as to how things came to be and why they are. I know it’s only 14 pages, but maybe drop some hints as to why Lena is in the enchanted forest. It does mention that her and her friends were there, but why and where are her friends now and if they are still there how did they get separated? Why are they there in the first place? Just seems like there are holes in the story and it kind of feels forced.

 

 

“You’re the monster from that old legend. The devil who was summoned by the witch who lived here over a hundred years ago, aren’t you?”

 

 

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I also think that some of the dialog seemed a little off compared to genre of the story? I’m not sure I can explain this correctly… It’s like mixing porn with an articulate mythological creature who is regal and Godly and Lena is the TSTL character that has had a lobotomy and is just… there.

 

 

“Now the pact will be signed. Let the earthly bodies combine with the heavens. I shall watch and continue to be pleased.”

 

 

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The sex was also just okay to me. It came at you hard and fast like a sneak attack acid trip. I’ve not read anything with bird monsters before. So that was new and intriguing. 🙂

What I did like is that the story has promise and it’s a great concept for monster erotica. It has this other worldly and/or dark fairy tale feel to it. Since this is only a 14 page story, maybe the other stories will shine some light into some of those holes that I feel are missing. I’m not expecting a 400 page masterpiece, but I do expect for the story to make sense. It’s like a drive by fictioning. I feel like somebody just hit me with something that could be fabulous but I’m not sure what. So I will be continuing on with the series.

 

 

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